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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-01-29 01:01 PM


(Thank you Geo, for inspiring me with your poem)

We're all on a Spiritual Journey,
Whether some recognize it or not,
For all are headed for Eternity
This, as man, is our Special lot.

Some choose to travel the low road,
And mind only low earthly things,
Thus for themselves, seek a minimal load
But empty-handed to Judgment, this brings.

Some seek to follow two Masters,
By obesiance to God and to Sin,
But as such, head for sure disaster
In the "Narrow Way" won't enter in.

Some will seek a level plateau,
Thus avoiding improvement and loss,
Simply maintaining the Status Quo
And in Mediocrity, will find themselves lost.

But for those dilligent Seekers of God,
With true Faith and Trust in His Son,
The Spiritual Pathway they trod
Will end with the Savior's "Well done!"

Yes, we're all on a Spiritual Journey,
So take heed in your travels, my friends,
Invest your Life for Eternity
To gain Heaven's Best Dividends!




 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



© Copyright 2000 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-01-29 02:30 PM


David, what inspiration!  This is so true and it flowed just beautifully!  The poetry on read on here is such a blessing. You guys are so good, and I'm just at a loss for words here. Let me just say Thanks to God for giving us this, and Ron of course who made it happen....and to each and everyone of you for sharing your souls!!  God Bless you David!
Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
2 posted 2000-01-29 03:15 PM


Lovely David...and I agree it just flows beautifully. You are an inspiration to us all.
sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2000-01-29 04:49 PM


Wow, you so elequently set the good books advice to a most meaningful rhyme.  Thanks for sharing your super talent.
Geo
Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 73
Nebraska
4 posted 2000-01-29 11:18 PM


Your welcome David, this is superb! Yes, we will all reap what we sow and what paths we choose are very important. God Bless you!!
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-01-29 11:38 PM


And a well done this poem gets too!  

Denise

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
6 posted 2000-01-30 08:07 AM


Dear David; I can't tell you enough, how much this poem has touched my heart. You have an awesome gift from God in your writting. I'm convinced that the Angel's of poetry reside in your house!

 02

dovesongs
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102
Michigan
7 posted 2000-01-31 12:17 PM


David, I can't think of a way that I have heard this better put.  Thank you for sharing your gifted insight with us.  Deeply touching and so true.  What wonderful inspiration it is to me.  You indeed have a gift.

 

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