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Tanzanite
Junior Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 11

0 posted 2002-06-07 02:11 PM

You brought out the evil within my eyes.
For many year your soul I've despised.
myself well being was to live life timid,
as my frustration level exceeded the highest limits.
emotionaly led me astray, with false advise
you insulted my beliefs, and almost made me cry.
left me disheartened and broken inside,
with vulnability the faster i fell/
with insecurity i found an eerie comfort zone at the bottom of your well/
on an emotional rollercoaster depriving my pride,
had to look within to find a voice of confide
speakin my mind was forbidden so I kept it inside,
till my two personalities began to collide.
looked inside and outside and not a single soul replied,
as I watched my life spiral and subside.
I could not escape your terror-filled lies.
But you knew that eventually the time would come
to a point where I wouldnt let myself become, half as dumb,
succumb to scums like you, who made my life cumbersome.
I was almost a fallen victim until I realized only I can save myself.
I rose from a caged hell to heaven on earth with no more rage felt,
while pickin up the pieces from the past as I crawled amidst the rubble of my shattered puzzle.

By Tanzanite Samson

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

1 posted 2002-06-07 05:18 PM

Incredible! Powerfully penned voice to the inner turmoil a lot of us have faced, Bravo! I could relate to this very much, may peace be yours!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2002-06-07 05:38 PM

I am glad you find peace. Joyce

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

3 posted 2002-06-08 06:41 AM

Some great imagery here ~ And the last to lines bring it all home. Bonnie

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-06-09 04:16 PM

Tanzanite: Much passion in this poem and stirring to read.

Betty Lou Hebert

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-21 10:18 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Tanzanite, this is a powerfully bittersweet write, sweet friend, know deep down that He will help you put this puzzle together, all you have to do is have faith you can paste together that big picture! (big hugggssssss) My heart is with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanzanite, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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