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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
I started this poem, and realized that it sounded alittle like a song. Then agian, I could've just imagined it, it wouldn't be the first  Btw, I know the name isn't original, and I'll probably change it if I can come up with another one.He Has Risen by, Matt Jesus died for me So that I may see I am not condemned But that's not the end God raised him from the grave So we may be saved He raised him from below So that we may follow This we know is true He died to save you We know because the God of hosts Sent to us the Holy Ghost Now he's with us all He lifts us when we fall It's with truth we speak Of that Holy week The stone was set aside And mary stood and cried For he has risen He has risen Hallelujah, Amen This was going to be the first in a series of 4 poems that I was going to post one per day, for 4 days, but It fit's good alone aswell, and I haven't started on the 2nd poem. I finished the 3rd, but I still have to do the ending of the 4rth as well. [This message has been edited by Encarta (06-02-2002 04:28 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) YAY!!! Yes, He died to save all of us and His love will always prosper for He holds a sanctuary in us all! (smiles) I too think this is a wonderful song, I love it, I can't wait to read the rest of your wonderful series, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes, I tried singing this and I think it could be sung. I would change rose to raised to be gramatically correct and I think it sounds smoother. Joyce |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
Yeah, I had raised at first, but thought rose was the correct way to say it. Oh well. Thanks for the replys |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I hope I didn't hurt your feelings Encarta. I thought about it and came back to erase it, but you had already seen it. Christ rose or arose. God raised Him or could raise Him. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Encarta: This is an interesting poem and you're right, it could be set to music and perhaps should be. The message is always timely and welcome. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You've done well This could easily be put to music, I believe. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
A good follow up of the immortal hymn, “One Day”. Thanks. I hope you complete your series soon. Melton |
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