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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-05-20 05:53 PM


There was a girl who used to
glazed out the window observing the field,
how beautiful the sun was,
and the comforting summer wind.

And when spring arrived,
she, too, wanted to go into the woods,
to share the beauty of the nature.
Somehow she could be only an observer.

And when the birds set off to
another shore of the world-
when there was no more singing,
and butterflies dance around-
she hoped to touch the golden leaves.

And when winter came,
she alone in her room without a fire,
observe a snowy day with the sun
adding a scarf on the roofs,
and warmth to the icecream mixture,
while all the time she was trembling,
waiting someone to set her free.

Just when all her hope was gone,
she held the cross close her chest.
Then all of the sudden as if watered showered,
she shouted she was free.

"Grace of God has forgiven me.
And in God's eyes I'm always a lovely child.
I heard a voice from within,
shouting I don't have to be afraid
for Lord is always standing with me."

Alleluia, You are Hosanna...
Alleluia, You are Hosanna...

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-05-20 08:04 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eliza, this is wonderful, sweet friend, He will always be here for us all as He bled for us all and His love will never fail! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, hang in there, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2002-05-21 02:00 AM


This is a lovely poem revealing the way to forgiveness.  Hold to the cross.  joyce
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3 posted 2002-05-21 06:18 PM


Beautiful images and feelings expressed here and od course, the answer to all problems..........the Cross and it's Bearer.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-05-21 06:33 PM


Wow, the power of yr words pretty much knocked me over. Thanks.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

aries_luv_ppl
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5 posted 2002-05-22 12:14 PM


thanks. and Amen.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Ousiders Cattermole
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6 posted 2002-05-27 05:25 PM


Your writing is getting better.
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-05-28 10:07 AM


Amen.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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