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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
Two Paths By, -Matt- The sun begins to lower away While I was taking a walk today It divides the sky in two One side light, the other dark blue Two paths cross in front of me Two paths, at least that's all I see On one side there’s light shining high On the other the darkness that'll die In the dark floats a dragons head With fire in every word it said But in the light it will die Because it cannot live up high The light is home to the divine And because of that, it proudly shines The dark is home to pain and doom Surely this wasn't started by a boom A voice called out, oh yes it did But can you remember what it said "Let there be light" and there was light It threw the darkness into the night But the sun will lower each day And darkness will find a way To rise above both you and me To darken everything we see Two paths, one light, one dark Ignites inside us a single spark That makes us she a single tear As we scream, "God is near!" Two paths cross in front of me Stretching as far as the eyes can see One that's holy and free of pain And one that's full of poisoned rain Me, I pick the one with light It's the only one pleasant to my sight The darkness is full of death and pain It tries to lure me, but it's all in vain Two paths cross before you One bright light, the other dark blue The choice is totally up to you So, which path will you choose? hope you liked it.here's a hint pick the one with light ![]() |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Two paths cross in front of me Stretching as far as the eyes can see One that's holy and free of pain And one that's full of poisoned rain ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You see clearly the right path to take, with this poem lets hope others will see too. Good poem. Deb |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Matt, Some delightful rhyming going on here in your poem.... Enjoyed it! -Bob |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) YAY!!! I love the hook you associated at the end of the poem, sweet friend, you made the choice seem so obvious as we should all be looking forward to the light! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I shall choose the path with light and try my best not to be led by the devil who tries to sway. One foot in front of the other I say. ![]() |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
lol, thanks for the posts, "I shall choose the path with light and try my best not to be led by the devil who tries to sway. One foot in front of the other I say." NICE ![]() ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You make the choice so easy as well as presenting it in such a beautiful read. Thank you, Melton and welcome to PIP Spritual |
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