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Alan
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0 posted 2002-03-29 08:59 PM


As I look into her empty room
Though it is all lit up
It still is filled with gloom
For I know the time of redemption has past me up
I am guilty of the worst sin of all
By letting Christ die upon the cross needlessly
I have lived my life in sin and made the wrong choice
I fall to my knees knowing in my heart
I have condemned myself to Hell
I look to the heavens and cry out in a loud voice
Lord please; let it not be too late to make the right choice
Knowing that my request has fallen on deaf ears
Just as the message of salvation did upon mine
My heart grows dark as my mind fills with fears
As I give into complete hopelessness
The room fills with a brilliant light
I hear a voice that sounds like distant thunder
Saying its not too late to receive me into your heart
Yes. Lord I want you as my Savior
My eyes fill with tears from the happiness found
I hear a small voice behind me saying
Daddy, What’s wrong, why are you crying
I looked at my little angel and said
There is nothing wrong for my life is complete
I have you and the love of God in my heart
And tomorrow is a brand new start

IcyHeart/alan
03/29/02


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miriam
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1 posted 2002-03-29 10:13 PM


it's beautiful to know when a new soul has rendered to Christ...you have found a path that will lead you to all good things.

miriam coronado



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2 posted 2002-03-29 10:22 PM




(big hugggssssssss) oh Alan, this is such a beautifully sensitive poem you've written here, I feel it is never too late to be forgiven by Him, for it takes time to understand Him and now He is more proud of you than ever for opening up to Him with such sincerity! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Alan
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3 posted 2002-03-29 10:43 PM


miriam... you are completely correct. no better place to be than in his arms.. Thank you for reading and commenting

Noah, my friend... There WILL come a day that it will be too late. Thank you for your comments

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2002-03-30 12:11 PM


This is a wonderful revelation of His love.  I am glad for you and your sweet daughter.  Joyce
Tramp Poet
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5 posted 2002-03-30 02:25 PM


apt description of that "moment of moments"
tis difficult to articulate something so
"supernaturally natural"...well done here.
thanks,
Daniel

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2002-03-30 06:46 PM


His mercy is beyond our understanding. I thank God for it.
You have written a beautiful description of the love of God, and how sweet it is to finally surrender.

Deb

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