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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(I've never posted here before until now, though I have enjoyed commenting to all of your wonderful poems here! I thought I'd give this kind of poetry a shot! YAY!!! Hope you like this! ![]() The Sand Dollar By: Noah Eaton 3/9/02 On the Washington coast I walk down the beach alone Balancing my laments with blessings in breathing the crisp air Searching yet for something to ease my emptiness, to welcome me To touch light upon the quiet water, be surrounded in praise That’s when I look down at the sand to see that familiar window A Window Of Divinity bearing forth the name of Jesus Christ I scoop it into my hands to stare further into the Star Of Bethelem Tracing my fingers down the engravings, appraising this omen This calyx bears the Wise Man, that all of humanity strives to become Marked on ancient stone, impregnable blood of good-will warming in loving care Pieces of the everything coming ashore, His word hand-crafted Reminding us that fortune truly helps those that make the most of good judgment My thumb rests on the Christmas Lily to the head, a token of giving and sharing I reflect upon all those warm loving winters with my family, just seeing this touchstone All the while I ignite this afterglow of my fondest memories Understanding the fact that this flower will blossom every year, only imagining too many future reunions Five holes mark the cornerstones, all the many wounds our Lamb have beared Crucifixion bearing new hope, His blood belonging now to five Doves Of Peace Such those are seen when breaking this sacred dollar apart Breeding for a stalwart sake to further dedicate the resilience of I Am I hug this disc close to my heart, blessed by this priceless gift Forgetting all my emptiness in staring through this lost girasol, contemplating “Would it be wise to break this flower apart to sacrifice the segregation of the doves? To take this chance, establish a risk that every dove alone can achieve their own reason That’s when I look back into the flower again, realizing this resembles the all-being That to be guided by five doves together is just as if He is walking beside me To deify the greatest love is to be fulfilled with a unified guidance Immortal is one love, one calling, the Five Hearts Of Wisdom mingled Awareness can only be perceived through the many windows of His world Open to all faithful eyes, found in a flower, a star’s wink, a bird’s whistle, every natural endowment I share this window to all of you, to reveal such a window I have encountered Something that I will carry on my distant journey to His honor, to maticulate into His light [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-10-2002 02:46 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Noah, You have extracted all of the wonderful wisdom attributed to the sand dollar to be found on our beaches here in our beautiful state of Washington. Well done. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: I am so glad you decided to post here. This is a wonderful poem and I loved reading it. I live in Northern Idaho but we try to go to the coast every year or two and one of the first things I do, on the beach, is look for sand dollars. I hae a number of whole ones and I enjoy looking at them all year through. This is a special poem! Please keep posting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Noah, my friend in God, you have uncovered an awesome story in God's Creation of the sand dollar. Your description is stunning! Thank you for sharing such beauty with us. And please do keep posting here. ![]() ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Noah, you have kept such beauty from us until now. This is as exquisite and fragile feeling as the sand dollar. What a treasure they are to find, like the day when one really discovers the risen Savior. We'll be demanding more, you know. Cheryl |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Awareness can only be perceived through the many windows of His world Open to all faithful eyes, found in a flower, a star’s wink, a bird’s whistle, every natural endowment ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ beautiful.... when I get confused in life... the ocean is where I go..... Gods power seen Thanks for sharing this with us Connie |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey N! outstanding visuals and descriptive phrase... a very mystical and enlightening piece. kinda like chocolate...tastes like we want more...lol Daniel ... was once upon, bleeding |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Mistletoe Angel, Oh My Gosh!!!! Look who posted! WoW! Kind of like when the Lord comes. If your not watching when it happens.... in a blink of the eye and then it will all be gone. Gosh, I almost missed this one. Beautiful!! Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing the meaning of the "Sand Dollar" with us. Since I've spent quite a bit of time visiting the beaches and the ocean, I'm a little ashamed that I do not know more about the sand dollar. I recall one time when I was a teenager when the tides were really low that my friends and I probably found 100 or more of them.... Wow, all the blessings that we had uncovered and did not even realize it. Anyway, your informative post was worth the wait and I am soooooo happy that I did not miss it. Again, Thank you for sharing the inner-most-meaning of the "Sand Dollar with us and for your consistent supporting praise for our poetry here at Passions. GOD bless you my dear poet friend and keep you and may your window of life be filled with wonderful "Sand Dollar" memories. -Bob |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah you always surprise me...you have much depth... Searching yet for something to ease my emptiness, to welcome me To touch light upon the quiet water, be surrounded in praise this was beautiful writing *s M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wise and wonderful gift you have...and the many avenues in which to place it...are before you... well done, Noah! |
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