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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-10 02:46 PM


(I've never posted here before until now, though I have enjoyed commenting to all of your wonderful poems here! I thought I'd give this kind of poetry a shot! YAY!!! Hope you like this!   )

The Sand Dollar
By: Noah Eaton
3/9/02

On the Washington coast I walk down the beach alone
Balancing my laments with blessings in breathing the crisp air
Searching yet for something to ease my emptiness, to welcome me
To touch light upon the quiet water, be surrounded in praise

That’s when I look down at the sand to see that familiar window
A Window Of Divinity bearing forth the name of Jesus Christ
I scoop it into my hands to stare further into the Star Of Bethelem
Tracing my fingers down the engravings, appraising this omen

This calyx bears the Wise Man, that all of humanity strives to become
Marked on ancient stone, impregnable blood of good-will warming in loving care
Pieces of the everything coming ashore, His word hand-crafted
Reminding us that fortune truly helps those that make the most of good judgment

My thumb rests on the Christmas Lily to the head, a token of giving and sharing
I reflect upon all those warm loving winters with my family, just seeing this touchstone
All the while I ignite this afterglow of my fondest memories
Understanding the fact that this flower will blossom every year, only imagining too many future reunions

Five holes mark the cornerstones, all the many wounds our Lamb have beared
Crucifixion bearing new hope, His blood belonging now to five Doves Of Peace
Such those are seen when breaking this sacred dollar apart
Breeding for a stalwart sake to further dedicate the resilience of I Am

I hug this disc close to my heart, blessed by this priceless gift
Forgetting all my emptiness in staring through this lost girasol, contemplating
“Would it be wise to break this flower apart to sacrifice the segregation of the doves?
To take this chance, establish a risk that every dove alone can achieve their own reason

That’s when I look back into the flower again, realizing this resembles the all-being
That to be guided by five doves together is just as if He is walking beside me
To deify the greatest love is to be fulfilled with a unified guidance
Immortal is one love, one calling, the Five Hearts Of Wisdom mingled

Awareness can only be perceived through the many windows of His world
Open to all faithful eyes, found in a flower, a star’s wink, a bird’s whistle, every natural endowment
I share this window to all of you, to reveal such a window I have encountered
Something that I will carry on my distant journey to His honor, to maticulate into His light

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-10-2002 02:46 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-03-10 04:16 PM


Dear Noah,  You have extracted all of the wonderful wisdom attributed to the sand dollar to be found on our beaches here in our beautiful state of Washington.  Well done.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2002-03-10 08:08 PM


Noah:  I am so glad you decided to post here. This is a wonderful poem and I loved reading it.  I live in Northern Idaho but we try to go to the coast every year or two and one of the first things I do, on the beach, is look for sand dollars. I hae a number of whole ones and I enjoy looking at them all year through.  This is a special poem!  Please keep posting.

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-03-11 10:51 AM


Noah, my friend in God, you have uncovered an awesome story in God's Creation of the sand dollar. Your description is stunning! Thank you for sharing such beauty with us. And please do keep posting here.

((Noah))
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4 posted 2002-03-11 03:49 PM


Noah, you have kept such beauty from us until now. This is as exquisite and fragile feeling as the sand dollar. What a treasure they are to find, like the day when one really discovers the risen Savior. We'll be demanding more, you know.  Cheryl
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5 posted 2002-03-12 07:50 PM


Awareness can only be perceived through the many windows of His world
Open to all faithful eyes, found in a flower, a star’s wink, a bird’s whistle, every natural endowment
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
beautiful....
when I get confused in life... the ocean is where I go..... Gods power seen

Thanks for sharing this with us
     Connie

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6 posted 2002-03-12 11:10 PM


hey N!
outstanding visuals and descriptive phrase...
a very mystical and enlightening piece.
kinda like chocolate...tastes like we want
more...lol
Daniel

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     and Tramp Poet for a time.
      Now; I'm just little ole me
       "Say friend; spare a rhyme"?...

Lighthousebob
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7 posted 2002-03-13 11:18 AM


Mistletoe Angel,

Oh My Gosh!!!!  Look who posted!  WoW!  Kind of like when the Lord comes.  If your not watching when it happens.... in a blink of the eye and then it will all be gone.  Gosh, I almost missed this one.  Beautiful!!  Beautifully written.  Thank you for sharing the meaning of the "Sand Dollar" with us. Since I've spent quite a bit of time visiting the beaches and the ocean, I'm a little ashamed that I do not know more about the sand dollar.  I recall one time when I was a teenager when the tides were really low that my friends and I probably found 100 or more of them....  Wow, all the blessings that we had uncovered and did not even realize it.  Anyway, your informative post was worth the wait and I am soooooo happy that I did not miss it.  Again, Thank you for sharing the inner-most-meaning of the "Sand Dollar with us and for your consistent supporting praise for our poetry here at Passions.  GOD bless you my dear poet friend and keep you and may your window of life be filled with wonderful "Sand Dollar" memories.  -Bob

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8 posted 2002-03-17 07:26 PM


Noah you always surprise me...you have much depth...

Searching yet for something to ease my emptiness, to welcome me
To touch light upon the quiet water, be surrounded in praise

this was beautiful writing *s

M

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9 posted 2002-03-17 10:05 PM



A wise and wonderful gift you have...and the many avenues in which to place it...are before you...

well done, Noah!

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