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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2002-03-09 02:41 PM

You Are Here

Lord, I feel your presence
Your spirit falls gently.
Piercing the layers of my self
seeking, knocking;You are there.

Evil thoughts, deeds, imagination
cloud the me, hide the me.
Asking for forgiveness, cleansing
suddenly; You are there.

Alone with hoarded quiet time
meditation, contemplation, selah.
Prayer of prayers, seeking again
for answer;You are there.

Listening to my beloved read
proverbs spoken for daily instruction.
Wisdom comes flooding, filling
we listen; and You are there.

Thank You, our Beloved
we bless You, we enthrone You.
You are worthy, You are love,
we worship; and You are here.

... was once upon, bleeding
     and Tramp Poet for a time.
      Now; I'm just little ole me
       "Say friend; spare a rhyme"?...

Denise

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1 posted 2002-03-09 04:32 PM

He does sort of have that way of generating that love within us, doesn't He, Daniel?! Beautiful heartfelt rendering!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-09 04:59 PM

This was truly uplifting to me today Tramp Poet, such a loving spiritual read, thank you. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-03-10 05:31 PM

reminiscent of The Psalms. Well done. Joyce

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-10 07:51 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always shining with love and the light of Him! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

5 posted 2002-03-11 10:46 AM

Well said, my friend.

((Tramp Poet))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

His Poet
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since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

6 posted 2002-03-11 03:52 PM

What a wonderful poem of praise and worship. Very inspiring to find my quiet time. Thanks, Cheryl

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2002-03-12 09:32 PM

Tramp Poet: I always enjoy your poems.

Betty Lou Hebert

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

8 posted 2002-03-12 10:56 PM

thank you each for the comments.
sorry i haven't responded sooner...
been having a few rounds of format hoedown.
Thought i was going to replace the harddrive
with a quick easy replacement...not! lol
Probabaly be a few more days before i get
re-configured and reloaded completely.
thanks again,

... was once upon, bleeding
     and Tramp Poet for a time.
      Now; I'm just little ole me
       "Say friend; spare a rhyme"?...

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

9 posted 2002-03-13 11:51 AM

Tramp Poet,

I love the gentle transition that your poem makes from there to here. So, very tenderly written with a glorious conclusion. GOD bless you and thank you for sharing your experience with me. -Bob

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