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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA ![]() |
Rainbows "Let's build an ark," old Noah said, "Before the Heavens start to shed Their tears of rain and waters rise And we're alone beneath the skies." His neighbors must have thought him mad. They didn't know that Noah had His hand in God's, who led the way And listened to his prayers each day. God told him how and when to start. The rooms to place within the heart Of this great boat and levels too, For all the creatures that He knew Must come on board and stay until All was accomplished by His Will. How was it then, to know that they Were saved, while all life passed away? Then Noah and his family, Spent many months upon the sea And finally a dove was sent To fly around the firmament And see if anywhere dry land Meant their deliverance was at hand. Three times it flew before it found A place to land upon the ground. Then Noah with his horde in tow Went forth to find a place to go, To make a home and multiply. A rainbow arched across the sky. The sign from God that nevermore Would He cause the rains to pour. Thus destroying His creation. Rainbows fill me with elation! [This message has been edited by Trillium (02-09-2002 07:07 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) May the dove forever fly with grace and a trill of Love and may the rainbows forever shine with joy and hope of creation! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Truly beautiful, Betty. Joyce |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Thank you for your very kind response to this poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and appreciate all your comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Thanks for reading and commenting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thanks, Betty! This is one of my favorite stories and you tell it beautifully. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Trillium what a magnificent write about a bible story, I love how you told this, Your rhyming is wonderful. ![]() Floria |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Betty Lou, You've done a great job on telling this story in rhyme. I have written a version of Noah too. I'll post it later. I enjoy retelling the Bible stories in rhyme, don't you? Cheryl |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
newell: Thanks for commenting. This story is one of my favorites too and I never see a rainbow, but what I think of it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
floria: Thanks so much for your nice remarks. Glad to hear you enjoyed the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Cheryl: Thanks for reading and commenting. I'll look forward to reading your peom about Noah. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Trillium, Me too... me too! Rainbows fill me with elation also. It's almost like looking at GOD to see one. So beautiful and full of light and promise. GOD bless you and thank you for sharing this wonderful Bible story with us. -Bob |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Bob: Thank you so much for your comments and I'm glad you feel the same way about rainbows! Betty Lou Hebert |
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