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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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I realize my imperfection, Was brought on me by sin's selection, And thus from God it meant defection, Unhid from Him and His detection. But for my sins I could not repay, Thus bringing me low, with much dismay, In sin's darkness I longed for the Day, To be returned into Life's True Way! God in Grace a Savior did provide, He, Who for my sins, suffered and died, Who rose again, called me to His side, Where in Love and Grace, I could abide. Thank You, Father, for saving my soul, Thank You, Jesus, for making me whole Thank You, Holy Spirit, for letting me know, Praise be to God, I seek to e'er show! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WOW! David! I can hear the heavenly organ music playing in the background!This poem should be a hymn sung in every choir! You are also growing wonderfully in your poetry, the rhyme and flow of this inspiring poem is perfection. The message of His sacrifice and His promise of salvation and our new birth of the soul is said incredibly well! Hugs, my dear friend, Ellie  A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
DeLeeme, this is so beautiful. "Thank You, Father, for saving my soul, Thank You, Jesus, for making me whole Thank You, Holy Spirit, for letting me know, Praise be to God, I seek to e'er show!" Such a wonderful testimony of faith. God bless you. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Nice message, well writtien. Thanks for sharing.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
deleeme...Very beautiful statement of faith in this wonderful poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
David, you've done a beautiful job of expressing thankfulness for His grace and mercy. I love the fact you included all three persons of the Trinity in your poem. Lovely. Cheryl |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
David, AMEN! You have expressed the desire for God's love in such a wonderful way A beautiful prayer!Thank you for sharing Cindi |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is such a wonderful poem of faith, sweet friend, He will always be here for us all to save us and offer us guidance! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your beautiful words are always so lovely and edifying! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
David, You can always find the words to show your love for God. Thi is beautiful. Joyce |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
David, From a technical standpoint, it is apparent that you spent some extra time here on tightening up your poem both in counting syllables and in use of meter. I liked the comma pauses throughout your poem. Your words also rhyme nicely. You have a wonderful knack for finding words to rhyme that most poets would have never thought of. I think your poem characterizes to me the life of anyone who has experienced the "saving grace" of GOD very well. (Testimonial Living) Nice title. GOD bless you. -Bob |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
David: Your title really sums up your life, doesn't it? Great poem! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Testimonial Living… Inspirational Giving Thanks Melton |
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