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Oz Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 13South Carolina |
Shattered wings - blood drenched feathers So many prayers have no answers Crashing to Earth in a downward spiral Prophesies unforeseen by the Bible An audience stares from miles above Hearts pour out with anguished love A crash, a cringe, for now they know Broken wings, tattered hearts, a shattered halo An Angel from Heaven has just been torn Loved ones gather, and begin to mourn Tears of sadness ring louder than most The Father’s, the Son’s, and the Holy Ghost’s Why oh why did these events amass? Because somewhere a child has just passed. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Hi Oz, Welcome. I read it. I liked it. And I will need to get back to you with comments because I need to go pick up my wife from work .......... God bless you. -Bob |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Oz, this is so so sad, my heart goes out to all these children and their families, and it always breaks my heart to see children pass away so young like this! (big hugggssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, you have a very loving and compassionate heart that shines in these words! Welcome to Passions, sweet Oz, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I join you in your prayers and tears for all these children! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oz, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I have to believe that in God's eyes that child had fulfilled her mission and we will see her again. Love, Joyce |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hi welcome to passions i hope you will be blessed here. please check your email for a special surprise.  robin i have a wish but only a certain guy can fufill it! [This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (01-19-2002 02:53 AM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh OZ, I am so totally speechless with this one, since I have lost a son. I don't know what to say, it is so so awesome. floria |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautifully said. Tis so sad when a child dies, I think we are all parents of that child when it happens.  Welcome to our humble home.  |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Oz, Your poetry is very expressive and implores from your readers here much emotion. I must say as a father that I love and adore my children very much and have a very high regard for life. For me to imgaine such an event as this truly breaks my heart ... But I do know that I have a GOD who understands, because He also lost a child here on Earth. Anyway, good poetry that I believe reflects very well the ideals of Heaven as children are taken from this Earth back to Heaven. GOD bless you and again Welcome. -Bob |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
While we weep on earth, all heaven rejoices. Our children are God's most treasured jewels. Be not sad. Your child is preparing for your joyful reunion. God now has help to get ready for your coming. It is beautiful in heaven! You'll see.  -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Oz Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 13South Carolina |
Hi all, I really appreciate your welcome comments. I love hearing your different interpretations of my poem. Just so you you all know though I have not lost a child. I had a dream one night and my poem was about my dream. In short what my poem means to me is that everytime a child dies - so does their guardian angel. I don't know why it came to me like that but it did and I wanted to share it so thanks again for your comments. Oz |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Welcome! Lovely, but sad poem. I do believe all of heaven cries when a child dies..tears of mourn for the pain of the one's left behind. However the tears soon turn to rejoicing for another one's come home to heaven. Deb |
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