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His Poet
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0 posted 2002-01-11 10:41 AM



I'll never forget as we fished by the sea
It was just my brother Andrew and me
We met this man, Jesus, from Galilee

He said, "Follow me, I'll make you fishers of men
So we left our nets quickly to follow him
We soon met James and his brother John
They had been mending their nets since dawn
So Jesus called out to the boat they were in
And they left their father quickly to follow Him

We would soon see things that were hard to believe
Demon possessed men He could quickly relieve
At a wedding in Cana He turned water to wine
It was becoming clear our Lord was Divine

We watched with five fish, the thousands He fed
He called Lazarus to life, even tho he'd been dead
He bid me to come and on water I walked
We gazed in awe on the mount as He talked
with Moses, Elijah, those prophets of old
How much more of Messiah was left to be told

We now realized this was no mortal man
He was the Christ of God's redemptive plan
We were blind to the fact that He’d die for us
So when they came for Him, I put up a fuss
I struck a servant and cut off his right ear
But he was healed at once as the Master stood near

I denied my Lord as they brought Him to trial
Then I remembered He had foretold my denial
I wept as they mocked Him, I was filled with shame
Yet He forgave us all, casting no blame
As followers we loved Him with all our heart
We just weren't ready for Christ to depart

But here we are now, four fishers of men
Still proclaiming His word and following Him
My name is Simon, called Peter, by Christ
May I spread the Good News the rest of my life.

Cheryl McClellan
4/12/2001



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1 posted 2002-01-11 03:31 PM


Thanks, Cheryl. This is beautiful!
-newell

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2 posted 2002-01-11 03:58 PM


I really enjoyed this...as if I were there, then.  Great job.  Linda
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3 posted 2002-01-11 05:04 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, these words have me flooding in tears, this is sooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) Your words always touch the heart, as does His. His love will always go on, for we carry on His love with hope and promise! We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-11 07:01 PM


A masterful re-telling of this old story of Peter.  Thanks for posting it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2002-01-11 07:03 PM


Oh His poet, I mean Cheryl, How I love how you retold this. It was wonderful hearing it from your own view. floria
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6 posted 2002-01-12 02:28 AM


Such a wonderful story of blind faith.  It's good to hear it again.  Joyce
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7 posted 2002-01-12 09:30 PM


Newell, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I love writing from the biblical characters point of view. Thanks for reading. Cheryl
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8 posted 2002-01-12 09:31 PM


Linda, thanks for reading. I'm glad I captured the moment for you. Cheryl
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9 posted 2002-01-12 09:32 PM


Noah and Betty Lou, Thank you both for your kind words and taking time to read my work. Cheryl
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10 posted 2002-01-12 09:33 PM


Floria and Joyce, So happy you both enjoyed this story. I have written several along this line which I'll post along. Thanks for reading.  Cheryl
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11 posted 2002-01-12 09:46 PM


A wonderful poem, Cheryl, very good rhyme and rhythm. Peter is one of my favorite Bible characters because he failed Christ even when he believed and knew He was the Messiah; and yet, Jesus forgave him, just as He forgives me when I fail Him. I love the scripture where the angel tells the two women to tell the disciples that Jesus has arisen from the dead and that He will meet them in Galilee. The angel added..."and tell Peter also"...I think the angel stressed to the women to tell Peter also so he would know he was forgiven. A beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.  
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12 posted 2002-01-13 02:41 PM


Humble Bee, Thanks so much for your reply. I too, think Peter's life is a wonderful example of second chances and grace. I love his outspoken manner, which often got him in trouble, but that was due to the passion with which he loved Christ. I think John was the beloved but Peter was the "go to" guy. Glad you enjoyed this. Cheryl
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13 posted 2002-01-15 03:00 AM


great piece! very purdy!tks for sharing.
robin<><

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14 posted 2002-01-15 10:22 AM


Thank you Robin, Glad you thought it was purdy. Cheryl
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15 posted 2002-01-16 01:46 AM


His Poet,

This is a delightful account of the miracles of Jesus Christ as seen through the eyes of His disciples and in particular Peter.  I am also intrigued by Peter and His great fervency for the Lord.  May we all be "fishers of men" as where called these four.

-Bob

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16 posted 2002-01-16 04:13 AM


Ahh a kindred spirit!
I like it when poets take on the mantle of the first person.
The responsibility becomes larger, more challenging and the benefit is a more succinct understanding of the subject.
When mixed in a poem the result is a clearer understanding of the situation/subject.
Well done cheryl, i liked it.

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