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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859![]() |
Choices Now, here comes sorrow forcing me, He takes my hand and tries to lead, But I hold back and won't proceed. I will not go. Now, here comes sadness up to me. Come be with me,I hear him say, Yet,I refuse to go that way, I will not go. Now, here comes comfort pure and free, And He invites, not forces me. He picks me up and carries me, I'll go with Thee. Now here comes happiness for me, "Oh! Can it be? Is it for me?" Take it my child , I'll stay with Thee, Now take it all, I'll set thee free. Floria © 2001 [This message has been edited by strbbux (01-06-2002 07:00 PM).] |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
floria: This is delightful! The choices here are not hard to make. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Floria, This is a wonderfully written poem with a beautiful message. I love the repetition that begins each strophe. And the way each strophe ends. Your rhythm and meter are perfect, as are your choice of words. This is a superb work, Floria. -newell Bringing God's Love through |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Trillium, I always look for your reply. floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Coming from you I truly appreciate it Newell. thank you kindly. floria |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! HIP-HIP HOORAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) These choices are always so wonderfully easy to make, and it is so exciting how just as long as we believe in it, happiness and comfort will blanket us In His love. (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Noah I always love hearing from you. floria |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Floria, I love the format you used and the words are wonderful. Beautifully presented and the choice is clear. Cheryl |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you so much cheryl..I was sorrowing over my son and this came to me, and I thought, well, I have to make a choice, I do pray a lot, but I also have to follow what God tells me to do. So I decided to take what God gives me, The joy of life, and then I wrote this. thanks for answering, floria |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Absolutely! All you have to do is day "yes" and he will come into your heart and direct your feet on the straight and narrow path to glory ![]() |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Amen Interloper, thanks, floria |
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