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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
[This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 01-16-2000).] |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
I am just letting it out as some of you told me to. [This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 01-16-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful analogy! Letting it all out takes courage. Now there's nowhere to go but up. Get ready to soar! Beautiful poem. Write more. |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Hum..I feel like saying buck up little camper..hehe..but i wont say that..lol.. A wonderful expression to the insight of the heart....beautifully written...nice job.. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Love the graphic an awesome sight of His to gaze upon! I'm glad you're letting it out and keep right on doing it. This was deeply sad my friend, but I can say I have felt this way too! You see yourself going and falling away and can't for the life of you pull back up. I think that's when we need to call out and say God, I will take your hand, help me out of this pit! Very well expressed!!! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Ellie- Thank you....it's just so hard to feel like soaring nowadays......it is inspiring knowing that you find this beautiful.... Majestic- Buck up little camper? LOL. You said it! Thank you for the inspiration. Rebecca- Thank you..thank you.. for the thoughtfulness that you have shown towards me....what you say makes sense......and thank you for the comment on 'expression'. |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
Arthur, I know that sense of falling, and the despair that knocks you into darkness where God feels a million miles away and the sadness within you consumes you. I wrote a poem a while ago called HOPE just after I came out of this place, and as soon as I read your poem I thought of it - hope it encourages you to look up to the one who can pull you back into the light. Drifting through my soul darkness flickers, fades, passes through the falling smiles. This descent awaits breathing the fear, inhaling the stench, sinking submitting to the pull the tug down. Above I see your hand reaching out shimmers in your glory untouchable to these blackened hands. And I paint a thick coat of shame around my hardened heart fold myself and wait for the chains to tighten. Drifting through my soul light then flickers, brightens, picks up the fallen smiles. This ascent awaits breathing the freedom inhaling the sweetness rising submitting to the pull the tug up toward you. For "my heart has heard you say 'Come and talk with me' And my heart responds 'Lord, I am coming.'" Bless you my friend, and leave your cares in the hands of God. |
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