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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2001-10-21 06:24 PM

Light and Fog

The fog is lying on the hills
But through the opaque clouds there spills
A light so pure, you have to stay
And watch until it fades away.
It surely must be Heaven-sent.
The whole white mass is deeply rent
With rays of warmth. A golden glow
Illuminates the ground below.
I stand in mist so damp and chill
But yet I linger, look my fill.
It grows and strengthens as I stare.
It captures me and holds me there.
I feel there is a message here,
As though an angel might appear!

Betty Lou Hebert

Published by Rhyme Time Magazine 2000

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 10-21-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-10-21 08:53 PM

BettyLou~
This is soooooooooooo beautiful~
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Well, what do you know ?

Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-10-21 11:32 PM

Marge: I just knew there was an angel hiding in all that glorious light! Thank you for pointing her out to me and isn't she a darling!

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-10-22 12:10 PM

This is a beautiful poem as all of yours are. Joyce

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2001-10-22 10:37 AM

A imaginative contrast between the elements of fog and light expressed here. I do believe that angels are near to help us through those foggy days. God bless you. -Bob

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

5 posted 2001-10-23 11:24 AM

You're an angel bringing such beauty forth from dense fog.

Love it!
Rae

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-10-23 12:32 PM

Thank you Joyce for such a nice compliment. I'm pleased you liked the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2001-10-23 12:33 PM

Bob: Thanks. I always appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2001-10-23 12:34 PM

Rae: Thanks for reading and appreciate your sweet comment.

Betty Lou Hebert

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

9 posted 2001-10-24 09:51 AM

Betty; What a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. Wanda

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

10 posted 2001-10-24 06:42 PM

Wanda: Thanks for your remarks and again, I'd like to say "welcome" to Passions. Will watch for your poems.

Betty Lou Hebert

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

11 posted 2001-10-25 08:20 PM

Seems to me an angel wrote this Trillium ~ Simply beautiful... Bonnie

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

12 posted 2001-10-25 11:21 PM

Bonnie: I wish I could say you're right, but it was just me!

Betty Lou Hebert

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