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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Just a smile given to a soul that's lost in pain lights a weary world A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 09-01-2001).] |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
That just might be all it takes. Plant the seed, and let it grow. Melton |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
What sunshine is to flowers, smiles are to humanity. --Joseph Addison (1672-1719) Today, as smiles are found in sparseness scattered upon our lives, yours is truly a welcome sight. A lovely smile you have and a lovely poem you write. -Bob |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very nice work Ellie.  I'm not sure if you're aware but line one has six syllables. Just letting you know because as a fan of japanese formats, I know how it is to sometimes accidentally throw in the extra syllable here or there.  Still, I like this one quite a bit... wow, very uplifting message. Great work. ~Allan People call me a madman, but I'm not mad at anyone. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
thanks Allan, I didn't realize it...oops, so I fixed it.  A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ My grandma always said - "A smile looks back at you - when you share it with another." This was a lovely reminder of that~ Thank you for sharing~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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