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A lesson In Summers Waning |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA ![]() |
Dusky and looking weary are the leaves on the dogwood tree, that form a canopy of shade over the lush floral delights of this waning summers garden. A stillness prevails, as mauve and purple clouds float across a storm laden sky. The water fountain dances and sings, unaware of all, but it's own joy. So detatched from all that surrounds, this fountain of splashing splendor gives serenity to garden and heart. A lesson that is deeply needed, is learned and harkened to. Detatch and be still, from the storms of life, and know that we are forever.... in God's care! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
How beautiful and so appropriate right now as summer is waning. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely way to compensate for summer leaving. Joyce |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie- my dear friend, As with age, declining abilities and Joys of the once known can be compensated by the possession of expanded experiences, greater wisdom, and yet a greater store of life memories. As with so many things, the way God deals with us, so many times on door closes and others are opened. Thank you for sharing your blest perceptions of such. I appreciate You, David Every Day's a Blessing |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ 'A stillness prevails, as mauve and purple clouds float across a storm laden sky' How very lovely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovel,y lovely, especially that last stanza, really enjoyed!!! |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Ellie, OH MY!! I must say...this poem is one example of outstanding imagery...I really felt like I was sitting with you right there next to the fountain...I could hear the water and I could almost look up and see the beautiful colors...Wow...I haven't read a poem like this in a long while...well I have been around in a long while either...Good to be back!! J~ |
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