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Dulcinea
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0 posted 2001-07-29 11:11 PM


Ancient of Days

He speaks in parables softy
Of long lost sense of reason
In ancient words of wisdom
Forgotten by the world
Enlightening every wretched soul.

Words of regal dignity
Pearls of treasured worth
The secrets truths of eternal life
Cascade gently from his lips
Refreshing as spring rain upon barren wastes

Immortal to mortal, divinity to divine
From eternal light and everlasting spirit
To darkness bleak and cold
To bring new life, new hope...glory untold.

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VAS
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1 posted 2001-07-30 12:18 PM


lovely and this line, exquisite:

Refreshing as spring rain upon barren wastes


Trillium
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2 posted 2001-07-31 12:12 PM


Very well done!

Betty Lou Hebert

Dulcinea
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3 posted 2001-07-31 06:35 PM


Thank you VAS, that is what the Word feels like to my soul...ummmmmm...so refreshing!

Thank you Trillum...I am glad you could stop in and enjoy!  

and forgive me for not being here much...final week of class this week, and I am up to my elbows in papers!  

WhtDove
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4 posted 2001-08-05 05:53 PM


A big AMEN to that! He is the "spring" of Life.

Very well stated!  

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Life may have influenced who we R, but we're responsible for what we become.
I don't question YOUR existance- GOD

Dulcinea
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5 posted 2001-08-06 06:44 AM


Thank you WhtDove, yes, oh, yes, he most assurdly is...thanks for stopping in to comment! I appreciate it very much!  
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-08-06 06:27 PM


Dulcinea~
Yes !  
And He washes us in 'The secret truths of eternal life'

Very nicely said.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MoonShadow
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7 posted 2001-08-10 07:06 PM


Great images reflecting contrasts that do not conflict... but show multiple facets. Nice job.
Dulcinea
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8 posted 2001-08-11 06:50 AM


That is so very true Marge! Thank you!  

Thank you MoonShadow, I am honored by your profound comments!  

Stephanos
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9 posted 2001-08-13 12:12 PM


Wow how beautiful this is!

Isn't the wisdom of God found in the scripture beyond compare?  And yet how often we prefer trivialities over these hidden treasures.  May God enlighten us to the worth of his word.

Stephen.

Dulcinea
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10 posted 2001-08-15 09:22 AM


Thank you Stephanos, yes, where would we be without the wisdom and beauty of that word...*sigh* Thank you so very much!  
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