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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-07-21 11:51 PM





The Light

The sunrise, when the morning breaks
Above the mountins, surely takes
It's luminous and golden glow
From He who is all light and so,
Each day is really affirmation,
He is our illumination!



[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 07-21-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-07-22 02:08 AM


Very true Trillium.  Well said.  Joyce
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2001-07-23 12:45 PM


Yes He is and forever will be our glorious Light and He does shine ever so bright trough your words my friend.  Bob <><
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3 posted 2001-07-23 03:00 PM



Trillium-
   YES!!  I love it!  
   This is so true, my friend..
   Very nicely done!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Trillium
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4 posted 2001-07-23 05:26 PM


Thank you all for reading this poem and I appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-07-23 10:58 PM


Beautiful work, Trillium.  Lovely images!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-07-25 01:16 AM


BettyLou~
Such a tiny piece with such magnitude of thought !
LOVELY~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-07-25 02:21 PM


I fully agree with each comment.  It's lovely!  Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
   Rae

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8 posted 2001-07-25 02:36 PM


I really enjoyed this one, the last two lines especially were superb!  
Trillium
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9 posted 2001-07-25 06:23 PM


Thanks everyone for reading and I am grateful for all the nice comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

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