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deleeme
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0 posted 2001-07-04 01:27 PM



S****ee, oh see all o***F
T**he awesome grand ad**O
R*ejoicing out loud ove*R
I*****ndependence t*****O
K*indness for me and yo*U
E*ngaging our good powe*R
U**seful freedom brin***G
P*roviding us each hou**R
T*hat blest dear chanc**E
H*ope of our true agend*A
E*nvisioning a big ques*T
B**lest living for al***L
A*nd noble brotherhood**A
N**ational recognitio***N
D*uly sought & deserve**D

    


© Copyright 2001 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2001-07-04 02:12 PM


This is a work of art!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-04-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-07-04 02:24 PM


David~
MY STARS ! !
This is just brilliantly done !
Your pride is shining o'er the land !
Thank you soooooooooooooo much for sharing.
What a blessed talent you've been given.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-07-04 02:36 PM


Awesome write, Dennis!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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California
4 posted 2001-07-04 04:25 PM


Very creative and a most difficult Double Acrostic you have written and you have done it so well with a true and powerful message of independence.  I liked the part about the "big guest" the best.  I have always imagined that fireworks will fly at Jesus' return though it is not scriptural.  Good work.  Bob <><
Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2001-07-04 05:51 PM


Wonderful job David.  A keeper.  Joyce
scout
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6 posted 2001-07-05 12:05 PM


That was Amazing.  You have a real talent at acrostics!

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

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