The Grace Of Freedom - Senryu

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-07-04 12:21 PM

The outside body
is surely blessed with freedom
cause for gratitude

Yet our souls be chained
bound by earthly cares and fears
prisoners of woe

We need only ask..
by His Grace we are set free
Freedom from within!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-07-04 12:39 PM

This is beautiful Ellie. I must study the Senru form. Joyce

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

2 posted 2001-07-04 12:39 PM

Dear Ellie,
  A good point made here!  How ironic that we can be so free in one way, but bound by the chains of darkness in the more important arena of our lives.  True freedom comes as we find, by God's Grace, true Freedom for all aspects of our lives, without AND within. Thanks for this Freedom's Day Reminder,
   David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-07-04 02:27 PM

Ellie~
A lovely reminder that 'he shall set us free'.
Very gifted in His glory you are !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

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Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-04 02:35 PM

Amen! Enjoyed these today, Ellie.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2001-07-04 04:34 PM

ellie,

A wonderful landmark for independence. Your poem gives reason for true celebration.... for we have freedom within and without through God's Grace.

Bob <><

scout
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since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

6 posted 2001-07-04 11:52 PM

Wow, the poem at first seemed so complex, but the message was actually really simple!

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-07-06 03:18 AM

this was nice...beautiful job...and the message was great!

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

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Mississippi coast

8 posted 2001-07-06 11:30 AM

I loved your senyru. Point taken.

Our health… gratitude
Our lot… prisoners of woe
Our hope… Free within

Melton

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2001-07-08 08:59 AM

I see many graces here....including your smile! Well done, Ellie....

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

10 posted 2001-07-08 10:52 AM

Very fine, ellie, yes, through and in Him we are free

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