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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
0 posted 2001-06-26 06:18 PM

Broken in Pieces
My life surrendered to Him
Jesus makes me whole

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.
© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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California
1 posted 2001-06-26 07:28 PM

ellie,

Though short in words yet your senyru speeks volumes of the restorational powers of our Lord and Savior.  It's miraculous what God will do when we give our lives unto Him.  Bob <><
scout
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since 2001-06-16
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2 posted 2001-06-26 07:52 PM

nice, short, and simple to understand.

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears." - Ez. 24:1
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
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3 posted 2001-06-27 12:45 PM

ellie:  This says so much!  I enjoyed it very much.

Betty Lou Hebert
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4 posted 2001-06-27 07:30 AM

Another powerful little piece Ellie ~ So few words say so much... Bonnie

That dock???  Oh, absolutely...not a doubt in my mind that we WILL sit together on it someday...
Romy
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since 2000-05-28
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Plantation, Florida
5 posted 2001-06-27 09:54 AM

Ellie,
This is a sweet, simple statement of truth that describes the healing power of God. A broken spirit can always be made whole again!
Debbie
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Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2001-06-27 09:49 PM

You've said it all so eloquently, Ellie.  Great write!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 2001-06-29 03:28 PM

This one shines as bright as that smile!  

How awesome He is...the hardest part though is surrender, total surrender. But, it's so worth it, that calming, overwhelming peace!

(((((hugs)))))

<*\\\><    
Know Jesus, Know Peace
No Jesus, No Peace

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD
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8 posted 2001-06-30 09:35 PM

Ellie~
Absolutely AMEN !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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