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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-05-30 07:55 AM

glorify the Lord
magnify His holy name
unto the heavens

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-05-30 08:40 AM

Great Praise Haiku!

Panne447
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since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

2 posted 2001-05-31 02:22 PM

Lone, This is super. I would suggest you cap the beginning word in each line and the word Name- goes with His - This is not a Haiku but a beautiful Senyru. Panne

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2001-05-31 06:55 PM

Glorious!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

4 posted 2001-06-01 09:53 PM

Amen LW ~ Amen...great little gem! Bonnie

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-06-02 10:28 PM

LoneWolf~
This is such graceful praise of His name.
Beautifully done, sweet lady.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-02 10:35 PM

Songbird:  Thank you!

Panne447:  Thanks, but it stands as is.

Ellie:  Amen!

Bonnie:  Thank you much!

Marge:  I will take every opportunity to glorify Him now that I have found Him again.  Thanks for reading!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2001-06-03 12:26 PM

You've said so much in these few lines!

Betty Lou Hebert

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-06-03 10:50 AM

lovely, Jennifer, simply lovely.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2001-06-03 10:53 AM

Amen! Have you put these words to a tune/chorus?

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-06-03 02:53 PM

Trillium: There sure is!

Kathleen: Thanks to you, my spiritual mother.

VAS: Amen! No, no tunes just my heart.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

11 posted 2001-06-08 05:46 PM

Lone Wolf,

Praise the Lord!!! Hallelujah!!!

I see that there is a full moon shining into your soul tonight...

Bob <><

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-06-09 07:02 PM

Bob: Always, my friend!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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