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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-05-22 01:32 AM


Kettle drops it contents,
Cleaning itself once more,

Boiling from the flame beneath,
Letting it all out once more,

The spill starts to permeate,
Affecting the surroundings,

Leaving a clutter unclean,
Till the owner arrives,

Showing a sadden image,
The solution remains consistent,

The owner proceeds once more,
To boil the contents within the kettle.


© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-22 02:40 AM


I don't quite know what you're saying here, but I like the way you say it. Joyce
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2001-05-24 12:34 PM


Xeonox,

Ah, an extreme counterpart to the parable of the watched pot that never boils.  I guess this one might be the owner who never learns?  Anyway, it's one, not such a good, way to clean a pot....  Got a kick from this one, done it a few times myself.  Bob <>< Wooooooooooooooooooooooooo.................... (kettle whistle)

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 05-24-2001).]

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