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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-04-21 08:04 AM


My spirit wings on lofty skies,
Springtime sky of azure blue.
Dawn of Grace effervescent light,
fill Springs floral soul anew,
embracing passions eternal kiss.

Blazing Son and gentle rains,
caressing sweetly growth within.
Calling forth a song of joy.
A symphony of Grace renewed,
sung with heralded eternal bliss.

Waltz upon these lofty dreams,
a promise of eternal Love.
Forever shall we dance our Song,
entwined in neverending Joy.
A Love beyond all mortal dream.

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2001-04-21 08:15 AM


Dear Ellie,
This is enchanting beautiful with a special feel and aura to it.--Your high level of inspiration seems quite evident from this flowing piece.  Well Done Friend,
                       David

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-04-21 11:28 AM


Lovely, lovely, lovely.  I started to pick a favorite line, but as I kept reading...that was very hard to settle on.  Well done!!
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
3 posted 2001-04-21 11:43 AM


Beautiful. "His rhapsody of Love."  How sad the world would be with out it.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
4 posted 2001-04-21 05:14 PM


Very lovely poem!  I enjoyed it so much.

Betty Lou Hebert

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
5 posted 2001-04-22 08:57 AM


The awe of seasons and thier distnct individual forms of life are ever aboundingly
wonderous.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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