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0 posted 2001-04-16 11:49 PM


This is a day late, I wanted to post this on Easter.  Oh well.  Happy late Easter everyone  

The shouting crowds are gathered here
Around a single man.
They yell at him and spit on him,
Yet very still he stands.

They beat this man and taunt him so;
They cause him so much pain.
But the angry crowds don't care;
They continue, unashamed.

They spit on him and yell at him;
They nail him to a cross.
And many did not realize
That he had not yet lost.

For as the soldiers walked away,
He turned his face above.
"Father, forgive them," I heard him say;
His eyes were full of love.

And while I watched him lose his breath,
Blood flowing down the cross,
The tears flowed down my face as well;
I couldn't make them stop.

This man would have to die today,
But I would get to live.
I wondered why it was for me,
His own life he would give.

The tears flowed freely down my face,
And I fell to my knees.
And as the sky grew dark and gray,
My Savior heard my pleas.

"Lord, you know I have sinned a lot;
And I can't understand
Why in my place on this great day,
It's you who has to die.

"I really don't deserve this love,
That you so freely give.
I pray that you will show me now
How you wish for me to live.

"I'll give up everything for you,
I'll serve you as I can.
I'm sorry, Lord, for all I've done,
I'm glad you had a plan."

And as my Savior breathed his last,
Hot tears rolled down my face.
I heard him speak once more -
"I go to prepare you a place.

"In three days I will rise again,
Don't be ashamed to cry;
For by the blood I shed for you,
You will not have to die."

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer Floyd - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-17 02:25 AM


This is just as relevant today as it would have been yesterday.  Very good. Joyce
sandgrain
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2 posted 2001-04-17 10:22 AM


Your work certainly brings all to a very personal level in the nicest way.  It's never outdated.  Thank youl
   Rae

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2001-04-17 12:09 PM


Marie; Thank you for writing of His Love in such a beautiful way that could only come straight from your heart.  Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Songbird
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4 posted 2001-04-17 04:06 PM


The message is one for everyday of the year.. and it is very nicely written.
deleeme
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5 posted 2001-04-17 06:25 PM


A very apt and timely message- for everyday of the year--you are right on time with this one and it is very nicely presented!
               David

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

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6 posted 2001-05-08 12:58 PM


Hey,

   Very well done   keep it

      -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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7 posted 2001-05-08 06:06 PM


We need to be constantly aware of His story and you have presented it so well!

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
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8 posted 2001-05-09 07:13 AM


Thank you. This indeed should be told more often.
Melton

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9 posted 2001-05-09 09:12 PM


Wow! What I missed! This was exquisite!!!

Wonderfully written, full of compassion!

Excellent, excellent job!!

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


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10 posted 2001-05-14 01:18 AM


great poem...marie ..i really liekd every word in this poem..awesome job..i loved it... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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