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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg 
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It's cold and hard to see ahead blind and deaf, I seek the light my skin is soft, and falls apart I swing my hands about, i search, i fight faith faith faith I can't see it. love love love is it there? I draw my power from a wire electric pulse that holds my eyes an impulse keeps me in the future a fleeting warmth comes not as a surprise faith faith faith I can't see it. warmth warmth warmth it's not there. faith faith faith I can't see it. love love love it's not fair... I'm made of stone. I stir and groan so lonely... I draw my future from my mind the impulse shooting up my back with hugs from God, I slightly smile upon my torture wheel, my human rack faith faith faith I can't feel it. God God God can you hear? faith faith faith Do I need it? love love love Is it real? the impulse reaps the grim rewards as my pain continues still I find the impulse true of meaning my empty heart begins to fill faith faith faith you're so different... God God God there you are... love love love i can feel it... warmth warmth warmth not so far... cut through the night it seems so right... it's lovely |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
He is called Our Savior with good reason! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Perhaps it is best I mention this poem is not necessarily about Christianity, just for further reference.  Thank you for reading. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Allan, You have a very unique way of writing that kept me reading and looking for the next lines. Very artistic.... it's like you paint a physical picture with the placing of your words and then the imagery is also very abstract. For me, I felt like I was on a table, a massage table or a chiropractic table, and I was getting these wonderful feelings shooting up my spine.... I know I'm strange. Please give me a hug. Bob <>< |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice Alan, God is giving us hugs when we are unaware. Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
so surreal and hauntingly inspiring A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Your unique writing style adds so much to this work. I enjoyed the process you led us through,too. Rae |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Allan this is fantastic! I'm so glad you tried, you far exceeded. It's like a song, it just flows! Absolutely terrific!!!!! <*\\\>< |
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