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robin-shep
Junior Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 28
northern California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-19 01:51 PM

POSSIBLE

constraint and cages
barriers of birth and being
prisons of place and person
trapped in time and texture.

but

pushing into a power
that seems so broad and free
striving to enter a great expanse
of possibility

striving, at last, to be

ME

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-03-19 02:19 PM

A strong statement of your uniqueness as an individual, a journey that all young people travel on. Like your style hope to see more of your poems.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2001-03-19 05:51 PM

Wonderful! You are unique and He loves you just the way you are! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-03-19 06:03 PM

And isn't it wonderful that we all fit into his great plan? Joyce

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 2001-03-20 09:19 AM

I like this style, and you've written powerfully.

I like the contrast of being constrained to striving to be free in expanse.

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

5 posted 2001-03-20 07:48 PM

Perhaps one of our greatest discoveries is finding ourselves for what we really are. I enjoyed this.
Rae

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2001-03-21 02:27 PM

robin-shep,

Your poem is beautifully written.....
For me it reminds me of my daily struggles to be more like Him,
the Great I Am. Bob <><

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