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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2001-03-05 02:49 PM


My Thanks to Ellie for inspiring me to write this poem.
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Two Glimmering Shadows

Two glimmering shadows partition the darkness,
Reflective glow of indulgence blessed collectively.
Sequestered sturdiness of our majesties honor,
Cultivating two souls into a perennial bond.

A serene, attentive man sifting life through hope,
Blends knowledge with poetry creating connection.
An internal depth portraying blistered dimensions,
Constantly knowing patience and faith were perseverant.

A sole woman swimming in severe denial,
Seeking friendship to bridge overflowing pool of blues.
Blindly crossing obstacles with proceeding resolve,
Assembled before her through answered prayers from God above.

Two glimmering shadows touch boundaries sweetest edge,
Swaying in unison upon dance floor of Gods love.
Two souls planted in separate growing fields of life,
Blossomed as one harmoniously within their journeys.



Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



© Copyright 2001 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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1 posted 2001-03-05 09:49 PM


Oh, Ria; I've just been reading this over and over, because these words of God's Love given to such two beautiful hearts and cherished so, you have captured the essence of perfectly! Exquisite! Love, Ellie
this last line is perfection......
"Blossomed as one harmoniously within their journeys"

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

BSC
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2 posted 2001-03-06 09:41 PM


This is just so beautiful LD ~ I love the "glimmering shadows" ~~~ and the images this brought to mind...."swaying on God's dance floor"...oh, just so lovely. Bonnie
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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3 posted 2001-03-06 09:45 PM


Gloria this is fantastic! I hope you'll submit this to the main site.??

I haven't words to describe the beauty here. You've written a masterpiece!


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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


Denise
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4 posted 2001-03-07 08:08 PM


Very well expressed and written, Gloria!! Beautiful!! So nice to see you again!!
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