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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-01-25 09:48 AM



Gone
~*~

On a winters eve
slumber is sweet

A  rumbling in the distance awakens
sleepy heads,
the night beckons
come see...
gazing at the night sky
a warm rain of peace covers me

Light splits the night!
it’s him!
Joy envelopes me like a whirlwind!
caught up...
gone

What a great day this will be


BloomingRose



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-25 10:58 AM


BloomingRose~
Oh, how I like this.

'What a great day this will be'

Yes !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2001-01-25 04:38 PM


And what a great day it is indeed.  Superb expression in this one.  So wonderful to read.
Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2001-01-25 07:04 PM


.............and the reign will fall with a flash of Light.  What Joy!   Bob <><
BloomingRose
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4 posted 2001-01-25 09:06 PM


Marge~ It will indeed be a great day! Glad you like this and "see" the light in it.

Mark~ It will be a day where all our sorrow will be washed away, to be remembered no more

Bob~ Yes! Amen!


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