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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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The new day takes in it’s first morning breath, As the sun crests the edge of this world, The trees stretch their arms and yawn with the wind, As the morning glory’s petals unfurl, The wandering wind whispers in my ear, As I breeze through this birth of new light, Speaking softly to me, “Know you not what’s near?” “Before tomorrow drives away this night?” The tallgrass conducts it’s symphony, I answer in silence profound, How I long to bathe in her sympathy, But I fear I have already drowned, Now I sit at the peak of these valley walls, Above the crystal waterfalls, Strain from the pain of this life so stained, Washes away the wonder of a will retained, Leaving no care for all I’ve ever gained, or loved, beaten down by my own remains. This new soul takes in it’s first morning breath, Born upon these valley cliffs, Inside me the answer exists only not, The clouds in the sky still shift, “I know not what is to come” I say, “As I know only this.” “My destiny swells from my own creation,” “What I long for will not be unkissed,” An eagle now soars these boundless skies, While the faithful wind answers me, “Live not your life, in that of disguise,” “And manipulative tyranny.” “Seek this life within yourself,” “For I know not what is to come” “I inquire, merely, of your inner wealth,” “For you are the chosen one.” The vagabond air now speaks no more, Curtains of silence blanket infinite shores, I know, yet know not, what’s now in store, Clandestine before and evermore, For I am the eagle that soars. Will you come travel with me? Shall we stick by each other as long as we live? |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
WoW! what a vivid picture in words you portray here- the imagry is picturesque,the sense of struggle tugs at the heart- the idea of overcoming is glorius, as the eagles soaring over the deep valley which once imprisoned the burdened soul. Your style is most impressive, your message one reaches out and touches. Thank you, David To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
The Spirit of rebirth and courage to change is so vivdly described in your incredibly well written poem. I agree with David...WOW! Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 For me your poem represents expanding beyond our own limitations. Viewing life from a more holistic perspective. A soul set free from the bondage of one's self. A marvelous revelation of inner being would surely answer the clandestine? Looking at life from an Eagle's view has a way of bringing all things into light, I believe. Bob <>< |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
An awesome piece! This one is so encouraging and uplifting, painted elequently. I do pray this is your true heart feeling. Thank you. Rae |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
Wow, this is probably one of the best poems I ever read. Top 50 ever! The beginning was so well written that I thought for a moment that you might be a professional writer. I wish I could shake your hand as this poem was simply fantastica. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
deleeme, thank you so much for taking the time out to read this analytically (sp?)  )ellie LeJeune, thanks for the WOW! I think thats the first WOW I've ever gotten! P lighthouse bob, i agree, the view of an eagle must be a spellbinding one. I will never truly know, yet I strive for it. mail me some <>< 's!! Just one? Please? a sandgrain, this poem was completely from the heart (to the best of my ability) Citizen One, wow, I didnt think it was THAT good. but hey thats cool |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow Eagle ~ Simply incredible from first to last. Such inspiration with wonderful imagery. Bonnie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I have to add too, that I'm awed by the wonderful use of imagery in here! This was EXCELLENT! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wonderful poetry. Chosen for a reason, a destiny yet revealed. Simply follow, you will "know" when he opens a door. Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This was an amazing read and will go into my library. Your images alone are outstanding but the message behind your words was tremendous. Finding that boundary that we hold ourselves to and taking the courage to accept what we could not possibly understand and crossing that boundary is the most rewarding experience we could ever hope to realize. Excellently penned. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
you know, periodically, i turn back to this poem for my own and other's thoughts on me.. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
DAaa what the heck.. maybe someone will read it again ;-) Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
maybe...then again... this poem is significant. i think the reason its so GOOD is because you were being genuine. the imagery, the message, feelings are so you! this is your soul being!!! its clear people saw that and responded like they did because they felt that. when you're being honest, believe me, there is no way anybody could ever deny you, and what you have to say. i was surprised when i read your earlier poetry.. it seems like you had so much wisdom already. i think people under estimate you. i think you under estimate you ! all that crazy stuff that happened/ IS happening is so stupid. for what its worth, our friendship has affected me a lot. you've shown me so much! even though we've been really stupid, dense at times I think we managed to realize major things and grow ! together. conversations with god basically blew me out of my little universe, and i KNOW how deeply you were/are affected. it seemed like too much to handle. the fact that you read and understood it, felt the truth inside, validated/reassured me so much! more than anybody else could have. more than i could have ever told you, though i tried. in my somewhat half-assed way of communicating. anyway, i can't blame you for messed up things that happen. i truly could never be mad at you. even though you talked a lot of ****. ha ha. this is but one drop of thought that i'm feeling. essentially, i love you a lot! i hope one day we can talk again! see ya! the end |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well some did and are glad of it. The courage of going beyond our limitations is what makes us who we can be. To almost step outside of ourselves and really take a look at the "whole picture" and fine tune it takes courage. This was truly an amazing piece of writing and I am honored to put it into my library and share it with others in Passions as well, by sending out a link to it. Fantastic imagery in this. Nothing means more to me than faith, family and my friends.  Proud Canadian [This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-20-2002 12:30 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup Sharon, thanks for the nice share. Eagle Scorpion, It is impressive and honesty truly is a part of the reason. Well done and words to challenge a reader by. Thanks. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joseph, a friend shared this with me, and I am so very glad she did so, because if you are capable of this type of work, then I would see more of this from you. I know my opinion means nothing to you, as you put in your "Constructive Critiques" message, but I thought I would let you know, regardless, that this shows some exceptional talent. Thanks! Karilea |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eagle Fine writing...uplifting, full of the beauty of searching, human and spirit-filled...much enjoyed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Absolutely breathtaking!!... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, always live life within yourself and be that eagle that flies with grace and a loving smile! (big hugggssssss) he always trains His eagles and you are a true one of grae, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EagleScorpion You poetically soared over every valley. It is a flight I have taken. But the soaring is not hard, It's the landing. Enjoyed |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
WOW!!! Your life is yours to live!!! thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us. miriam coronado |
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