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I Sing! My Heart is Open. |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
A song that plays my heart A box, the music dancer A gift that thou impart It sings, I know the answer It sings of Christ the Lord It sings, I must afford! My heart is open now And heard triumphant vow A chorus, angels, deep Melody, birth of King And I, a promise keep My heart shall ever sing It sings of Christ the King It sings, oh how it sings My Lord, each note defined In heart and soul and mind The babe, in manger waits As kings from far off lands Their song resonates So I may understand The song of Christ our Savior Brings forth stirred behavior On waves, two thousand years The song, my heart still hears To dance and merry sing The Lord comes here to live New notes and chorus bring New life for He forgives! I sing of Christ Lord’s beauty I sing no thought of duty I sing on deaf ears fall A song from birth’s recall I sing of Christ the Lord I sing I must afford! May hearts be open now Who’ll take up cherished vow? [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I will, I hear ya! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I too says wayout! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
well done Walt..a very special day indeed ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, I certainly am glad I was cruising around here to find some good stuff... Find it I did.. This is a great holiday poem, walt... I like it, I like it... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank yuh victoria and nan yuh i shoulda prolly uh put this elsewhere but i just wanted more peeps to see it yuh |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful Walt! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This, young man, is wonderful! I should hope to see this side of you more often! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ What a lovely song you've brought to life with your verse. Joy abounds amid the sounds of voices singing with the bringing of praises ringing full of the joy of our Lord. Thank you for this gift, Walt. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very awesome walt--just beautiful! i'm sure i havent read you enough..!! hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
all ye recent repliers made me happy aint no liars |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
A chorus, angels, deep Melody, birth of King And I, a promise keep My heart shall ever sing It sings of Christ the King It sings, oh how it sings My Lord, each note defined In heart and soul and mind Walt these were some beautiful lines! I enjoyed this one a lot. Wonderful for the holidays, and well everyday. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very beautiful Walty Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Impressive! Poetry rulez! So does Jesus! So let's praise him with lines upon lines upon lines! You've done this well! |
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