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Ladycat
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0 posted 2000-12-05 04:22 PM


What have I been looking for
What is there that has been missing all along
That love
That fairy tale kind of love
That love that is pure and true
The love that is whole and forgiving
That love that will last the end of time
That love that will keep on going far into my old age

That love that is only found in fairy tales
That endless love
That peaceful love
That wholesome love
That love that I get when I walk in a church
That love that I get when I talk with God
The love that I feel when I see a rainbow or touch any of God's creations
God's love
God's fairy tale love
The love that some people only dream of, but a love that I feel everyday

Love,
Lady

Thank you mom for making me understand this.

© Copyright 2000 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-12-05 06:35 PM


This is wonderful Lady ~ How sad that some people just don't know where to find it... What a beautiful job you have done, showing where it is.  Bonnie
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2000-12-05 06:39 PM


You are Blessed to know God and to know that He Loves you....  and that is no fairy tale.  But, I must agree His Love does go far beyond our comprehension or our human expectations.  Love in Christ, Bob <><
Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX
3 posted 2000-12-06 01:54 AM


Thank you so much for understand all that is going on and understanding that I have found my solid ground.  Much love for reading the piece and understanding it.

Love,
Lady


Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


LoveAll
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4 posted 2000-12-07 07:12 PM


This is really amazing!  I really love this!  You are an amazing poet.
God Bless and Keep Smiling  

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

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5 posted 2000-12-07 08:00 PM


very beautiful ladycat..enjoyed your lovely words..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


gidget7
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6 posted 2000-12-08 12:40 PM


Thank you, I do not mean to sound selfish, but I feel almost as if I read this poem on Gods plan, simply put, I sadly have backslid. I have not been going to church or praying like I know I should, and my soul has been begging for the beautiful and fulfilling love that only God can give to me. I have ignored the urges, and I must say honestly, you have humbled me and helped me to see that I am depriving myself, thank you ever so much, truely, from my heart thank you.
Suzanne Arlene
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7 posted 2000-12-08 09:34 PM


Now that is a poem filled with love. enjoyed reading it alot. Put a wonderful smile on my face and a warmth in my heart. take care Suzanne
ellie LeJeune
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8 posted 2000-12-09 10:35 AM


Truly a love story about the REAl love of God that dwells in the heart and we are blessed to know it! Beautiful poem! Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



WhtDove
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9 posted 2000-12-10 01:38 PM


Oh you couldn't have said it better!
I've thought a lot on this, and I think, at least for women, we are born to search for this love. Though we search in the wrong places, and we won't find it in people. But when we look to God we find that perfect love.

This was absolutely beautiful and so touching.

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


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