»
Archives
»
Spiritual Journeys
»
Words from the Devout
| Spiritual Journeys |
|
Words from the Devout |
|
|
dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Words from the Devout My eyes are wide with sight, but not the sight of ordinary Love has come to blind me, replacing simplicity for complex Vision of hearts entwined in the wake of passion and desire And all the fires that burn within us. You, my angel of the morning, the night, of the future Whose beauty is unlike any other and I can not deny you Anything, yet I want to keep you for myself, deny you the Freedom any wild spirit deserves, but each time you Spread your wings and take to the sky my heart breaks. Promise me that in the moment your wings fold, and your head lays Low to rest, it will be me in your thoughts, no other Lie to me, if you must, to keep me hoping that even time Can not separate us, can not build any wall to widen and thicken Barring you from my touch. And should I lose my path, I know that yours will find me soon And guide me through, as my eyes are clear and my hand rest Over my heart, within your palm and there is no greater love Than the love between a man and his god. Joann Renee' Muszynski 11/11/00 |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Joann Renee' Muszynski - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dragonpoe; How enchantingly lovely and romantic is your poem. I had to read it twice to get the full measure of it's beauty. Welcome to Spiritual! I surely look forward to reading more, you are a gifted poet. Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
||
|
BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Welcome Joann and thank you for sharing this beautiful piece, the imagery is wonderful, and the last line... wow, says it all. Bonnie |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! This really caught my attention from beginning to end. The end is not what I expected to see, and so those final few words really stuck with me. Excellent way to end it with words that are SO true! I'm glad to see you posting!  |
||
|
Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
This is a really good poem I too had to read it twice.Amazing. A journey of words Suzanne |
||
|
Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Dpoe, A different style for you from what I can remember - You lead us dowm one path and then the twist at the end - a nice surprise. Panne |
||
Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very nice poem. Welcome to the site. Betty Lou Hebert |
||
|
sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome! I love the deep romantic lines as well as the wonderful ending. Hoping you'll do more on this forum, Rae |
||
|
Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I truly did enjoy this poem. Very nice job on the last line, it made me stop for a moment of ponderment. And welcome! ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
||
|
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Dragonpoe, Excruciatingly Romantic.............. Bob <>< |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
