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Deb Lynne
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 180
Where blue skies meet blue ocean

0 posted 2000-11-11 10:33 AM


In your time of sorrowed tears
With an aching heart you feel
Like nothing could take away
The pain that weighs like steel

It's hard to take a single breath
Without feeling like you'll explode
Just remember you only carry
One small portion of this load

Hugs from friends help to ease
The hurt for just a short time
You think that you are all alone
With each step as you start to climb

To face each day that's bitter sweet
And memories are all the remain
Be reassured God's there with you
Sharing with you all the pain

With each tear that silently falls
A part of your pain shall pass
Trust in knowing that she's home
In the arms of her Father, at last



[This message has been edited by Deb Lynne (edited 11-12-2000).]

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2000-11-11 01:27 PM


These rae good words of counsel to the bereaved and lonely soul. From our own experiences with grief, we can reach out to others and help guide them through the nightmare maze.  Good Poem here,  David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
2 posted 2000-11-12 04:00 PM


Wonderful reassuring words to those who hurt.
Thank you for writing this beauty.
Deb/BloomingRose

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-11-12 04:38 PM


We are His arms and we are his comfort as we reach out to heal and console. Beautiful poem of how He uses us to comfort. love, ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
4 posted 2000-11-12 06:22 PM


Half way through I thought "This is a nice prayer piece to give to a friend in need" then when I read the end, well, it put that thought in concrete.  
LoveAll
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 148
B'dale, USA
5 posted 2000-11-12 06:46 PM


Wow...this is really amazing!  It is full of so much truth and compassion.  I love it- you are an amazing poet!
God Bless and Keep Smiling  

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 2000-11-15 10:44 AM


I love these lines:
Be reassured God's there with you
Sharing with you all the pain

With each tear that silently falls
A part of your pain shall pass

This is beautifully written, with such a touching message.

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
7 posted 2000-11-16 03:52 PM


What a beautiful piece of consolation Deb, words that I'm sure can help many in their grief.  Thanks for sharing.... Bonnie
juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
8 posted 2000-11-16 06:05 PM


Beautifl words of comfort.
Juls

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
9 posted 2000-11-17 02:49 PM


It is always a comfort to know that we are not alone and that our loved ones who have gone on before us now rest in the arms of Jesus.  Bob <><
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