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My Gift (tanka)

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-10-30 02:08 PM

You have blest me Lord
Beyond measure, my whole life
Met my needs daily
You give and you keep giving
How bountiful your blessings!

What can I give you
That you don't already own?
My obedience!
My worship and my praise!
The remainder of my days!

[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 10-30-2000).]

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2000-10-30 06:42 PM

Oh, Dennis; I can feel your faith and sincerity, as these come straight from the depths of your heart. The Angels, I'm sure, carried these on wings of song straight to His throne. Love, sis

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-10-30 07:59 PM

Hi Dennis,
Great instructions in living for Him in a beautiful poem, honoring our Heavenly Father. Wonderful, wonderful and I thank Him for your life and witness for Him. Marcy

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-10-30 10:23 PM

Dennis~
And a beautiful gift it is.
Thank you for sharing this blessing with me.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-10-31 12:42 PM

Oh yes Dennis these are the things He so desires from us. You have said it well.
Juls

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2000-10-31 03:23 PM

Dennis: what a perfect tribute to God, wonderfully written!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

6 posted 2000-10-31 03:59 PM

Dennis ~ So few words, saying so very much! Beautiful. Bonnie

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