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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
the Lord walks by my side no need for me to try and hide He holds my hand serving as my guide traveling the land smooth as the tide I pledge my faith and in His word abide He will take me high as the eagles glide on His love's wings I will forever ride for they stretch far reaching infinitely wide Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
He will take me high on the eagles glide I love waking up to inspiration like this!Your glorious poem has set the perfect tone for my day. Thank you. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Beautiful LW!!!!! What lovely images your words have brushed. Bonnie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Infinitely wide! Oh this was wonderful in every sense of the word. What a calming this brings  <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Wonderful!! Your love for Jesus is showing! Well written. Marcy "He will take me high as the eagles glide on His love's wings I will forever ride for they stretch far reaching infinitely wide" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful open pledge of faith and knowing. Lovely write in every way. |
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Winnifer Fayre Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 13 |
inspiring, expressive, imaginative. i think that adding a period after the word "glide," or capitalizing the word "on" in the next line, would make the poem easier to understand. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 As an eagle protects her young, those infinitely wide wings of God's Love will certainly keep us safe during our times of danger. I love the correlation that you make between God and the eagle. This is very promising indeed. God Bless You, Bob <>< |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ellie . . . You are very welcome. So glad to get your day off to such a nice start!! Thank you so much. Bonnie . . . Thank you, so nice to hear the images came across well. White Dove . . . Writing it brought me a calming also. Thanks for reading. Marcy . . . It is He who makes all things possible and any talent I have I owe to Him. Thanks!! Mark . . . You always have to have faith. Thanks. Winnifer . . . Thanks for the reply. Bob . . . You are so right there. Thanks for the compliments. It was the first thing that came to mind when I wrote it. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Jennifer, Yes, he does and this is a wonderful way of putting your words of faith in poetry! Kathleen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very comforting! Denise |
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