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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-12-05 02:20 PM


Heaven's Hue

Magnitudes of natures beauty
canvassed colorfully
before our eyes.
Drips of desirable harmony
bleeding through
the essence.
Grains of inspirational life
sown upon God's
fertile universe.
Destinies pretentious aim
hidden from view
offering contemplation
to the brilliance
of heavens hue.

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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871
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1 posted 1999-12-05 02:44 PM


Beautiful, Lost Dreamer. The imagery and message are great.

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-12-05 04:22 PM


Wow - I love this. Lost Dreamer. Beautiful, great phrases... 'the brilliance of heaven's hue'. K
Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-12-09 06:39 PM


Magnificent, L.D.  Very inspiring work.

Michael

Sir Real
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since 1999-12-11
Posts 17

4 posted 1999-12-11 08:40 PM


great poem, Loved the images your words invoke
sireal

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-12-11 09:22 PM


I have to agree! The imagery is terrific! Wonderful!

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Jesus is the reason for the season


Denise
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6 posted 1999-12-11 10:09 PM


Beautiful hue!

 Denise



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 1999-12-11 11:26 PM


Ahhh Lost Dreamer....This piece is so beautiful....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
8 posted 1999-12-12 03:17 AM


Beautiful paint here and the message is awesome. Great work!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
9 posted 1999-12-13 12:04 PM


I thought I was dreaming as I began reading then suddenly was seeing majestic artwork through your words.  What a gift!
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
10 posted 1999-12-30 08:16 AM


Absolutely beautiful!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


blueyz75
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 138
IL
11 posted 1999-12-30 08:34 PM


Did you have a paintbrush in your hand rather then a pen?  Seems like it!< !signature-->

 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman

[This message has been edited by blueyz75 (edited 12-30-1999).]

mirjam
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since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
12 posted 1999-12-31 10:23 PM


totally!!! Wow what imagery - and wording.
Love it love it love it.

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