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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
SUNRISE Speeding on the tracks of sadness and disgrace my train of life overfills, crawling snail’s pace. Disembarking passengers leave an empty space and I am left in darkness with company; my face. I see the lines of worry, of pain, unhappiness, stretching out in loneliness, not getting any rest but as the whistle blows I look out in surprise for God’s pure, glowing light I see in His sunrise. My train is now adorned, golden banners flying high, forgiveness of myself wrapped up in nature’s sky, and passing through the pain of evil in mankind I pray for all to feel the beauty of sunrise. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
HB, This is a beautiful train of thought- especially the further it gets down the track! David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear HoneyBunch, Oohh, I liked this one much. You have captured so well a problem I have, forgiving myself, knowing Jesus does. I love it and a superb job with the rhyming scheme. Marcy |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
Hello David, Thank you for responding but, of course, the train is still travelling - destination; sunset! Helen --------------------------------------------- Hi Alle'cram, Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. Perhaps forgiveness of ourselves is the hardest thing we can do in life but I'm trying. Helen |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a great piece! Good soldiers can weigh themselves down carrying the old worn out boots of all the past battles when they're of no use anymore. Each sunrise is God's reminder of newness in life. Bless you. |
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