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It's Midnight |
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
It's Midnight I hear the sound of a mighty trumpet calling I see the moment, I hold my breath Midnights moon cast beams of light serene clouds part in awe and reverence the white horse glows in the moonlight straining against the winds A robe dipped in blood drapes the king many crowns adorn his head fire in his eyes look through me he is the word of God... It's the midnight cry I fall on my knees, on my face in awe of who he is In the twinkling of an eye he takes my hand... BloomingRose |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You've put Revelations into a good poem! I love this! Excellent work! <*\\\>< Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I think you need to change your name to "Full blossomed Rose". Just beautiful. Agreeing with WhtDove, great job putting scriptures in poem and I think you did a exceptional job writing the interpretations. "The fire in his eyes",(as He see's all), "looking through me".Loved it. Marcy "A robe dipped in blood drapes the king many crowns adorn his head fire in his eyes look through me he is the word of God..." |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
oh, this is just great! Very well done |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Blooming, this is so beautiful. Loved every line, most especially "in the twinkling of an eye He takes my hand." Terrific job. Bonnie |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you all for your kind words. Tis soon my friends... |
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