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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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The Meteorite A meteorite approaching earth Gave cause for grave alarm As nations banned together To protect the world from harm Everyone became aware Of the planet’s fated plight And looked to help their neighbors And those that could not fight Each day it traveled nearer And each day a brighter light Had mesmerized the entire globe But not with panicked fright A strange and wondrous feeling Had blanketed the earth It was as though each living soul Felt one another’s worth As though a lovely woven veil Fell gently from above Covering the entire world With peacefulness and love The meteorite came closer yet And they stood, but not in fear Each person demonstrated love As the end was drawing near Love and peace poured from the earth At this sight so strange and odd But it was not a meteorite It was the face of God It was the very first time In the history of mankind That every soul was looking up To God at the same time. Elizabeth Santos |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Liz; What a fantastic spiritual idea, i wish only for this to be true. Beautiful poem and a terrific inspirational message. Love, ellie You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Liz - Oh wouldn't that be a sight to behold! How beautifully you have written this scene, it was as if I could see it all happening. Just wonderful. Bonnie |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
I love it! What a wonderful thing that would be if that could happen. "As though a lovely woven veil Fell gently from above Covering the entire world With peacefulness and love"  God Bless!"Of all those arts in which the wise excel, Nature's chief masterpiece is writing well." ~Essay on Poetry, John Sheffield "Those who trust in the |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can only imagine what may have caused this wonderful piece of poetic insight! Truly, this will be a favorite of many! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 An astounding correlation between the Light of the world and the meteorite. Makes you wonder what it will truly be like when spectators begin to see afar that Heavenly City descending from the sky? |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Liz, What a different but marvelous comparasion - of impending doom versus loving fellowship and anticipation of the Lord's coming again in Righteousness. Truly uplifting and inspiring--comming together to face the challenges- instead of falling apart in cringing fear. I am awed, David |
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YeshuJah Malikk Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 263 |
The coming together theme in this poem is nice..but I doubt if it'll happen like this. In fact, scripture informs us that many will run and cry, 'rocks fall on us'.. the imagery is certainly heart warming though. Thanks. |
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FacesinHim Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29 |
Oh if only this could be...I'm so saddened by the reality of things, Sigh... |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Absolutely beautiful, Liz, in every way!! To be able to pen this thought to paper! I stand in awe of your work. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I'm with Marcy here. I stand in awe of this!  There will be that time Liz when we ALL we see the coming of his glory. It says that ya know! This was truly awesome!<*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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