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JP
Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

0 posted 2000-07-06 02:02 PM


Sacred blood
of the true Christ
slowly soaking
Golgotha's stone

Sacred blood
of humanity's hope
silently saving
sin-stained souls

Sacred blood
of His only son
cleansing, healing
life from his death

Sacred blood
of Mary's miracle
born for sacrifice
dying for our rebirth

Sacred blood
of the Lamb of God
giving his all
to save His creation

Sacred blood
of the King of Kings
offers eternal glory
for those who believe
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Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good."  E. Hemmingway


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-06-2000).]

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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-07-06 05:40 PM


JP: Wonderful prayerful words, filled with all the wisdom and grace we ever need to know. Thank you for the inspiration. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-07-06 07:06 PM


JP, I took it upon myself to see if my "moderating" skills worked, I edited "sone" to "son"...

send me an e-mail if I have stepped over the line...

thanks,

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


JP
Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
3 posted 2000-07-07 11:02 AM


Nope, no line stepping here.  In fact, feel free to do anything you want to my stuff if it will make it better!  

Seriously folks.... I coulda swore sone was a word... Ah, there it is!  "...a unit of loudness, subjectively determined..."  Hmmm, doesn't quite fit does it?  I guess Son would be the right word then....



Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-07-10 10:47 AM


I hope we'll get the pleasure of seeing your work in here more frequently!

He is awesome, and He's given all for us! You've described with that perfection!

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2000-07-10 12:25 PM


Well, if we re-arrange your poem, we can make "sone" fit...

glad you're not having one [fit]

LOL!

Hugs,

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


toes21
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 24

6 posted 2000-07-10 04:11 PM


Amem, and so true are your words.
Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
7 posted 2000-07-10 05:21 PM


JP, Beautifully written with wisdom and knowledge. Amen and amen! I especially liked the verse below.  Blessings to you, Marcy

"Sacred blood
of the Lamb of God
giving his all
to save His creation"


sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
8 posted 2000-07-10 09:39 PM


Wow, it's all packed in your lines!  Powerful.
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