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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas ![]() |
I turned my back against the sun, And spread my arms in loss... Lo! Stretching black before me lay The shadows of a cross! |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This one is really clever. Your message is subtle and thus gains in impact. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Rex; The imagery very profound here and done so elegantly simple. WOW! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I really liked this one! I had to read it a few times before actually grasping it though. Not through any fault of yours though. It has a special ring to it, it demands your attention! It's short, but I love those kind that can say so much in such few words. You've done just that here. ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elegant... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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