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Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
I sat outside in the dawn hours to watch the sun rise beautiful in all it does in all it brings us will I ever see it again could I ever know this feeling again I'm leaving soon and I'll always remember this dawn remember the colors of God's paint the beauty of the brush strokes the simple peace it brings me I'm leaving soon to join the rest who've gone before to see the family that I've lost to play again like a child will I see them my little sister and brother will I get to hold them I'm leaving soon though I'm sad to go I know it's for the best I guess God knows what He's doing when He takes away a life when He takes away a future when He says it's time to go I'm leaving soon but at least I got to see another dawn Isaiah 1:18 "Everyone loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Marcy, this is wonderful! Another dawn, I love it! Very simplistic in beauty and thankfulness. This is a treasure! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 What a wonderful promise. Life is but a vapor and then we are soon leaving. This could be our last dawn and then we will be joined with our loved ones that have gone on before. As you are, I am looking forward to it. Nicely written.Bob <>< |
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Geo Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 73Nebraska |
What an awesome poem!! The message so wonderful and superbly written! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
We get used to the status quo, Most say stop when it's time to go But if the Lord says "Come with Me" Then surely the Best is yet to be! I enjoyed your poem which you wrote with a different perspective--not a death which but rather in acceptance of the appointment we all have, which is for the most part sooner than we think or may personally wish for. God bless you friend, David< !signature--> "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear Allstaria22 This is such a beautiful piece, so peaceful, yet wistful, and so reminds one of the grace and beauty of God's Hand. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work. Should be in the book. |
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