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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
i'm going to die today. all my past, all my troubles, will be so far away. i'm going to die today. and i'll never worry about this evil that led me so astray. i'm going to die today. but don't be sad, don't you cry, this is a happy day. i'm going to die today will you be there and come with me? it really is the only way. i finally died today died to evil, died to flesh, died to this world. i layed down my pride, welcomed in change, accepted final love, and I WAS BORN TODAY |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Good shock effect, glad it was death to sin, and born again to newness of life. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Well done. Death to self and surender to God, the only answer. 02 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Phew! You scared me for a moment there! Shock affect for sure! This is great! Love the ending!!!! |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
pharon - Whew is right.....Great job with this one, kept me right on the edge.... Perfect ending! Bonnie |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
pharon, Yes sir re! You hit the nail on the head with this one. All the suffering has been done, just put a death to the old and enjoy the new....grand poem. Marcy |
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Geo Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 73Nebraska |
SUPER job with this!! Like WhtDove said, scared me for a moment!! Really liked this!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amen! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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