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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
one day i awoke to find, a total stranger in my mind. my solitude had been forsaken, it was my soul that he had taken. i try to reason with my thought, it was my mind that he had bought. i wonder what is left of me, he has my eyes i cannot see. i struggle with my inner feelings, he tells me no and sends me reeling. i need to salvage one last part, but it's too late, he has my heart. i feel lost, out on an ocean, ever sinking, without emotion. the waves envelope me, toss me around, it's an unknown place to where i am bound. i see things i've never seen before, as i'm washed upon a distant shore. i wade up out of the ripping tide, there's someone with me, by my side. my vision is clouded, i'm filled with fear, i hear voices whispering in my ear. could it be this stranger that invaded me, i look for answers, hear my plea. the stranger speaks, his voice familiar, i listen intently, his words peculiar. i have been with you for all eternity, for i am you and you are me. i have always been there, your steps i followed, your very life i have shadowed. into your life i did not creep, for i am here to awaken your sleep. i am your conscious, not a stranger, to protect and keep you from all danger. advice i have, if you will hear it. for i am you, your inner spirit. the things i say are out of love, listen to them carefully, they're from above. the role of angel is my part, follow me, for i am your heart. me. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
You've stated your case very well-like a simple rhyming story that enters into the sublime-very good!  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If one chooses not to listen to their inner spirit, life is turmoil, indeed. Good poem, mojar. Michael |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
this was my first work in 20 years, and i felt it to be profound. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Mojar this was lovely...enjoyed it much. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Mojar, this is a very good poem indeed and I will once again 'echo' the above statements! You give a great point with this poem! I liked it greatly! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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