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Elusive Dream |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
The dream I just had vanished from sight. Like the mist that slips through the night. I wake up with a strange feeling inside. Elusive dream, why do you hide? Was the dream of someone from my past? It seemed to come and go so fast. Perhaps a dream of what's to come. This fog in my head seems so troublesome. I fear that I may never see This dream that seems to follow me. I wake up trying hard to recall. But nothing comes to mind at all. Tonight I will have the dream again. And this night I hope it will be a friend. When I awake I hope to find, This dream that capitivates my mind. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Such a lovely poem on dreams! I love it! Those dreams can sure be elusive, can't they?  Welcome to Passions, Eloise! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
All my dreams are elusive..I never remember them. You captured the way I feel exactly! Good poem.  |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Keep on Dreamin!!! I can't always remember mine either. I'd rather dream and not remember than not dream at all. Nice piece -RS ------------------ |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you for the comments and also the welcome. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you for the comments and also the welcome. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome, Eloise. Very, very nice. Dreams elusive, not conclusive. Ah, but real enough to want to be captured. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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