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My Quipping Whip
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My Quipping Whip |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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I'm back at passionate poet's door Much quicker than I was before I'm whipping out my quipping whip And quipping much more quicker quips Until my final quip is whipped From whipping quips I will not quit Don't quiet my quicker quipping lip For I'll quickly whip a quipping quip Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Madame Liz you're quite a whiz, Quipping whip in hand. Go ahead, Liz show me your stuff ... whip up a quip, if you're quick enough. Whip that quip and make it quick ... I think that you're very slick. Just in case you don't reply, I'll catch-you-on-the-quip side by and by. On your lip a quip, send it to your fingertips. Engage it to the submit button let's see if you're full of mutton. Whip that quip and give it a flip. I hope it quickly comes my way, for if not well, thanks a lot ... I can't stay up to play. *Come on gal ... I'm game. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge you have a quipping lip Flittly quipping whipping quips But do not play with my quick quips I'll show you my one-upmanship I was late to find your quipping quipper Or I'd whipped it out so much more quicker Your quipping friend Elizabeth |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, this is good, really enjoyed the read  BTW Marge I enjoyed yours too ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Quite the quipper whipper, you are. Up at light of day. Now gal, my pal ... let's quell the quill that whipped you in a frenzy ... I'll just bet it's what you et, that has got you quipping, So take a dose of something grandiose ... and quit your flipping quipping ! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - *Dark Angel - Flip your quip Miss Lizzie's way ... See if you get her to play. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Quip on!!......'S'.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge I've quipping whip and rhyming mime Who chimes a rhyme most any time You can't hear the chimes I hear 'Cause I have got a miming ear Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, ha ! A mimeing rhyming maniac! I knew that you were a sucker. Go ahead, I now proclaim ... you are the quipper-picker-upper! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
My name is Bounty, I'll admit And you cannot outquip my quip I'll pick you up, I'll suck you in And do it with a quipping grin I'm quicker than you think, you see I was busy posting poetry Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I will be the first to admit, you indeed have a quip-upper lip. Do not let it interfere with posting poetry for us, dear. The bounty is forfeited I must now claim, I'll wear the title in this quipping game. I'm too quipped to quote, so don't even try ... let the quipping begin and whipping? ... not I ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A quipping quip I sent to you But know not where I sent it to It's whereabouts I know not yet It's somewhere on the internet It said that you are very slick But I'm aware of you technick Like a slithering serpant in your wake A snake well knows another snake Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Elizabeth, I thought I knew you very well But now it seems, it seems, I know not what your quipping means, Or whether it means or seems? It is a quip on words you say But I wonder at the whipping flay I'd think I'd rather the weather know Or whether the weather,is if or so. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I don't know what possessed me such a silly poem to write I only know I did it in the middle of the night And understand I'm under very heavy medications That can cause confusion and at worst hallucinations Confusions always been an inherent part of me But lately my confusion is just confusing me I may not be quite accurate in all I say to you But I get so much enjoyment in believing that it's true Confusion isn't harmful, it's not an ugly beast What's very real to me is not confusing in the least So I don't know where the whip came from and don't know where it went But with it or without it I am very quippy bent So never fear I have no whip, accept appology In the meantime I am studying meteorolgy Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, There is no need for appology And enjoy your meterorolgy I find confusion good for me. It blocks out all the misery. The poem is excellent It shows the wit of vent. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
I must admit I am confused The pill I bit Was it red or blue If blue it was I understand If red I am In no-mans land Thoughts expressed That are so clear should help me find Way outta here ! |
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