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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Jagged Dead are the lovers Who have punctured Each ones heart Words of hate Occupies their mind The love they had Unable to find Jagged knives thrown With gritted teeth And stares of stone Aiming high to Pierce the soul Destroying the life That each stole The memories Each heart contains Will seep through Thumping veins ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is powerful, DA. The memories Each heart contains Will seep through Thumping veins Great last lines, and love your title, too  ------------------ Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: Are you ok my friend? I hope so HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Very powerful poem. Reminds of the end of my last relationship. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Geez girl you really do need to talk don't you!  I'm sorry Angel girl, I will be on later and we'll talk ok? HUGS big ones!!!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow....you know I can relate to this one my fried. SO sad and so powerful with emotions. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
powerfull emotions indeed well done Dark Angel. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Caroline, Thank you, I appreciate your comments. --------------- danni, thank you. --------------- Ruth, yes Dear Friend I know, and Thank you for your comment. --------------- Rainbow, I really don't know. Thanks hon. -------------- WhtDove, thanks Angel. -------------- Thank you UK Hero. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
DA (((((((Great big huggs))))))) I'm so sorry that you're feeling like this sweety and I'm sorry that you've been hurt like this. You know that you can always call me and talk to me anytime, please do. I'm worried about you. I wish I could give you a great big hug. (((((((Huggs.......))))))) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, thanks Honey, I really do appreciate that. ((((HUGS)))) back. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very powerful indeed and I also can relate.....very well expressed Dark Angel!...sending Hugs....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thanks Pepper, Thanks for the hugs hugs back ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Mmmm - sad when that happens. More than sad. Excellent poem despite the topic... |
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