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Open Poetry #4

At stake

mc
Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 67
México

0 posted 1999-11-25 01:51 AM

So speak to me and dare to hear
all the things that are within
my heart is trembling, gotta see
that I'm mistaken for what I wish.

I hear my heart, confussed the least,
that I'm with you, my thoughts indeed
so fear no more and come to me
I wait for you, my theme is faith.

I lay awake with you in mind
I scream no more and yell your vow
I want to run and be with you
my words are true, my path unknown.

Beware of time and see the risk
I take it slow but can't delay
my soul's in need for a gentle voice
so you should see that I'm at stake.

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mcestrada

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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1 posted 1999-11-25 10:44 AM

I love the last stanza...very nicely done

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Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog

mc
Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 67
México

2 posted 1999-11-25 02:53 PM

Thank you Caroline...
I feel great when I write but when people read it and like it I feel satisfied.

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 1999-11-26 01:03 AM

I love this one!

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